17 December 2008

The Girl with Brown Eyes Poem

I keep getting people finding my blog by searching for poetry about a girl with big brown eyes. Unfortunately I just have poetry BY a girl with big brown eyes.

SO, I've decided to write a poem. It's not about me. It's just about a Girl with Big Brown Eyes.

They consumed me.
I didn't look twice because I didn't get a chance to look away.
They were pure chocolate.
Rich and dark.

It was just her.
The room faded to nothing.
There was no noise.
Just deafening silence.

Wishing her to turn around.
Hoping she wouldn't.
I couldn't turn away.
I couldn't let her vanish.

She's flawless.
She is so well put together.
A puzzle so perfect you couldn't see the seams.


Ok. So that's where it ends. Anymore & it breaks.

Tah-Dah.


Bambola x

3 comments:

lacouturiernyc said...

that was beautifully written :)

xoxo,
La C.

skgillespie said...

oooh, I like this :)

You are clever, lady.

Em said...

This is gorgeous Liv! I had an amazing book of poetry I used to write all through high school, but I burnt it! Whoops..I would have loved to get it published but I was an angsty teen ;)